Needs moar STUFF!
Its okay, but I'd recommend adding a drumline and bass n stuff, and if not, at least altering the melody between two different ones. Because the first couple times it seemed like an intro, and the next couple times it just seemed like a boring melody. I though it would at least kick in with other things. when you said the best part was 1:09, I though you meant thats when everything would kick in, and you were telling people to just to wait because it has a long intro. Unfortunatley, it's ALL an intro xD
This seems more like a melody test than a song. And if you like, I could add stuff to it like bass and drums and more melody lines. I only have the demo of FL Studio, but I have figured out a way around it. I could, with your permission, download the song, transfer it to a wav file, and put it in FL Studio and add whatever. All you need to do is give me the BPM, so I can accurately place it. And of course, I'll send it back to you so you can post it :3 Just make sure to give me credit xD
If I get it now, it would probably be finished by the end of the weekend at latest, later today at the earliest.
So how about it?